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Honestly, I didnt find myself laughing, more like a 'wtf' laugh (not in a good way). Almost every joke (and there's 4 of them) consist of mario getting hit by something, or some kind of low budget explosion. Not to mention, the sprites were out of scale, and some tweens were overly slowed down, which doesnt leave a good impression of effort. The whole thing was just sloppy.
And learn to compress sound, please...
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"Yah gotta like it for what it is..."
Sure, the series drifted away from the formula a bit, but getting past it makes it worth it. Yeah, the series seemes to evolved into a Mario Bitch Slap feast, but hey, do what you want with it. Its still funny as hell.
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I actually liked that it was a little slower paced so I could follow what was going on; and the jokes seemed really clever. Awesome work.
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But only 16 phrases? Thats disapointing.
I was hoping to hear more from The phillips CD-i games. Consider a sequel.
Author's Response:
There was only fifteen actually, the last button goes to my YouTube Channel. But yes, I am going to update this (somewhat) regularly.
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Alot of the wit and fightstyles in this flash makes it worth watching.
Random jokes thrown in with random violence, what do you expect:D
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It still feels like it needs a graphical improvement, considering the length is so short. Wasn't entertaining except for the song at the end.
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I thought the best part was making fun of the gadgets, and having to "download" a patch for them. It was actually pretty authentic having the download mirrors and shit. The rest of it was "ok."
I dunno if this was done on purpose, but sometimes the error windows didnt go away, so I got rid of them by clicking the start menu.
Still a very good flash. Some of the ideas were cool. Also, nice credits music;)
Author's Response:
Thank you a lot for your constructive criticsism! :D
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"I thought you actually had a good idea"
However, this "commercial" was awefully boring to watch, mind you it is your 1st flash, it could have been a hit.
A few suggestions -
- Use a higer framerate, like 24 fps.
- If you're using sprites, thats fine, but try to be more fluid with your tweening:
like easing, and zooming in and out.
- Make the overall style a bit more cornier, since commercial is what you're aiming for. Instead of sliding pictures, try to make it POP-OUT at me, with more interesting backround effects.
- If you are willing to go the extra step, use voice actors, even your own voice if you're up to it.
Good luck with your flash creations...
- Chaos
Author's Response:
Thanks for the suggestions!
I think that I may someday update the flash once I get a better at this.
Your advice will help lots.
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"Very simple animation, but the point got across..."
I'm sure alot of people felt this way. I liked the use of voice and sound, although a little bit more of animation is to be desired; maybe you didn't have to rush on it.
Still a fine piece a flash if I say so myself:D
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"Flash isn't easy" is so right, especially advanced actionscript.
Very well animated video. Loved the style, and moral. A masterpiece indeed.
Author's Response:
Well thank you :$.. xD, I can't even make actionscript :| .. man it's so complicated.. but lucky I can make a flash like this, I know I can make things better .. LOL :P.. thanks again
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