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[Platform Tutorial]

Good tutorial, but some flaws.

My biggest issue so far with the script is for some reason, I cant have more than one object with the instance name 'ground.' It will only move things inside my first ground object. Are you able to do this, or is it something Im doing wrong? I might be able to fix it by repasting the script with a different instance name, but itll be a bit inconvenient.

Another minor flaw is that sometimes my character wont come to a complete stop, which isnt game killing, but a little annoying if Im trying to make a high quality game.

Aside from that, I really like this platforming tutorial because its one of the few with actual momentum (something alot of platformers need) but its kinda hard to edit since its all in one frame. And its definitely something I have to edit a bit.

Kwing responds:

You can't have two or more Movie Clips with the same instance name; that confuses Flash. However, if you want moving parts and stuff, you can create a moving Movie Clip within the ground Movie Clip.

I'm coming up with a new platform engine right now, but it's taking ages. It'll be a bit like Hoverman Racing, but hopefully a bit better.

[YouTube Poop Soundboard]

I love Youtube Poop!

But only 16 phrases? Thats disapointing.

I was hoping to hear more from The phillips CD-i games. Consider a sequel.

Paradox responds:

There was only fifteen actually, the last button goes to my YouTube Channel. But yes, I am going to update this (somewhat) regularly.

[Super Sprite tutorial]

Not too bad...

But the curve fit should be pixels. And it didn't feel as friendly or fancy as other tutorials. I can tell it didn't take long to make and for that, it gets what it deserves.

naruto703 responds:

yeah your right thanks for the review :D

[Classroom Sim]

Not horrible..

The only thing is when you go to your locker, I cant get the hall pass, exept inserting text. And all the subjects are the same, but it was clever!

mikenuzzo responds:

When going into the locker u hav 2 press the "take it" words

[Stress Away]

It could use more...

The style was ok and funny, but it was very short and limited.

Orangeblob responds:

I've never worked with actionscript before. I be sure to make an upgraded one when I learn more of it. Thanks

[Spaceballs Soundboard]

Cool

I feel like watching spaceballs right now!

turkeybanjo responds:

looks like a case of man bites droid.
mr. critic man have you reviewed rocky 5000 yet?

[_ULTIMATE TUTORIAL 2_]

Thanks!

This tutorial has helped me alot. Some of ur exp files are sorta glitchy but you still give good advice and cover many subjects.

I like pizza too:D

GAMECUBICLE responds:

exp files?