ChaosCriticisor's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Sonic Vs Vegeta Part 2]

The fact that there IS a part 2 is hilarious...

Seriously, 7 years and you decide to make a part 2. Im like blown away, I remember seeing your parody the first day I was on NG.

Still, it didnt have the same magic, maybe because it was alot longer than the first and it moved faster, plus the concept of the first was simple, vegeta stomping the shit out of sonic. Thanks for the memories tho.

Rikimaru-Azlar responds:

haha, yeah Sonic vs Vegeta was created out of silly dispute about the two characters. Azlar made the original to try and wind me up, recently I; Rikimaru, decided to reply to it (not an easy task) but I did it none the less. The result is a weeks work studying DBZ and messing around with samples. I apologise greatly for creating it hahah

[Vegeta vs Mario]

Wow...

That ending was just ... uncalled for.

As far as the actual animation, it was nice. Some parts seemed better animated than others, but it was a smooth animation.

But man... that ending...

Camron23 responds:

The next one won't end abruptly like this one.
Thanks for the review.

[Pokemon Center Commercial]

I thought you actually had a good idea

However, this "commercial" was awefully boring to watch, mind you it is your 1st flash, it could have been a hit.

A few suggestions -
- Use a higer framerate, like 24 fps.
- If you're using sprites, thats fine, but try to be more fluid with your tweening:
like easing, and zooming in and out.
- Make the overall style a bit more cornier, since commercial is what you're aiming for. Instead of sliding pictures, try to make it POP-OUT at me, with more interesting backround effects.
- If you are willing to go the extra step, use voice actors, even your own voice if you're up to it.

Good luck with your flash creations...

- Chaos

DarrkOne responds:

Thanks for the suggestions!

I think that I may someday update the flash once I get a better at this.
Your advice will help lots.

[Flash for dummies]

I know, I KNOW!!

"Flash isn't easy" is so right, especially advanced actionscript.

Very well animated video. Loved the style, and moral. A masterpiece indeed.

Kde777 responds:

Well thank you :$.. xD, I can't even make actionscript :| .. man it's so complicated.. but lucky I can make a flash like this, I know I can make things better .. LOL :P.. thanks again

[Command & Conquer TE]

Well done. Got it where it counts.

I haven't played alot of retro C&C latley, but damn, this was very well made. Plus there aren't many C&C flashes, and you did a very good job with sprites, voice, humor, etc. Greatly presented, and finished with a bang:)

Killerratte responds:

BANG !

[Wrath of Shadow ep. 4.1]

It needs polishing, but pretty good overall

Not, bad. The movie lacks a few elements, and the dialogue could use work, but you seem to have it where it counts. The problem is... part 1 is almost nothing but a hefty intro and dialogue. Try to make it up in part 2.

Shi-Gu responds:

thanks, the part two is going to be a big battle in the desert, and a little part of normal animation, I just separed it because it was gonna be heavy for my computer.
But I hope you like more part two ;)

[Blobb: Trailer]

It has potential, but..

For one, the music wasn't so catchy (others can disagree). And I know were drawing blobs, but maybe you can make up for it in more animation/neatness, although, it was only a trailer, so I might check it out. But this thing doesn't have me begging for more.

muflubbagon1 responds:

I'll try and impress you anyway. Thanks for the review.

[DBZ UBFE 1]

OOooo harsh

Maybe it was deleted the 1st time cuz a mod say the following in your comment:"EDIT 1... W00t i get today online and see 3.4!!!
WHATS WRONG WITH YOU PEOPLE!!!!

And the mod may have taken it seriously, but o well.

This movie was sick, like I said in my other review, and I cant wait for pt 2.

DuDuL responds:

It was my own comment xD... and i fixed text and bugs thats all... and i deleated it