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Has a charm to it

Alot of the wit and fightstyles in this flash makes it worth watching.
Random jokes thrown in with random violence, what do you expect:D

I like coke more too

It still feels like it needs a graphical improvement, considering the length is so short. Wasn't entertaining except for the song at the end.

I thought you actually had a good idea

However, this "commercial" was awefully boring to watch, mind you it is your 1st flash, it could have been a hit.

A few suggestions -
- Use a higer framerate, like 24 fps.
- If you're using sprites, thats fine, but try to be more fluid with your tweening:
like easing, and zooming in and out.
- Make the overall style a bit more cornier, since commercial is what you're aiming for. Instead of sliding pictures, try to make it POP-OUT at me, with more interesting backround effects.
- If you are willing to go the extra step, use voice actors, even your own voice if you're up to it.

Good luck with your flash creations...

- Chaos

DarrkOne responds:

Thanks for the suggestions!

I think that I may someday update the flash once I get a better at this.
Your advice will help lots.

Very simple animation, but the point got across...

I'm sure alot of people felt this way. I liked the use of voice and sound, although a little bit more of animation is to be desired; maybe you didn't have to rush on it.

Still a fine piece a flash if I say so myself:D

I know, I KNOW!!

"Flash isn't easy" is so right, especially advanced actionscript.

Very well animated video. Loved the style, and moral. A masterpiece indeed.

Kde777 responds:

Well thank you :$.. xD, I can't even make actionscript :| .. man it's so complicated.. but lucky I can make a flash like this, I know I can make things better .. LOL :P.. thanks again

This is...OUTRAGEOUS

I see this becoming like the next NUMA, Respect for
-Risking your social life.
-Sharing an amazing song with us.

I usually say something like "this belongs somewhere else" but I cant but help to ... just JUMP UP WHEN I WATCH THIS!

Needs much more...

This really could've been good. But it lacked quality in many places:

barely any sound,
needs backrounds (I suggest looking at Mario RPGs at Spriters resource),
and it was just too slow paced,
needs some casual music.

If you work on all of this I might just look foward to part 2.

Looks Promising...

A decent fan flash for StarCraft II. The artwork and sfx were pretty amazing. I just hope you know how to compress like hell or your going nowhere. And try to touch up on the dialogue as well, for example: "zergs."

-"Hell its about time!"

Lots of effort and potential...

But really, Yhtomit.. your drawings are bad. I mean, I'm no chluaid, or uber-artist of any kind (explains my sprite movies), and this is exactly why I stopped my part.
I mean, I guess that was the style you were aiming for, but it didn't work.

Because when I simply compare your parts (or other parts that simply sucked) to Renaenae's, or Andy-Parker's, the rest looks like a joke. It's not a strong point coming from a collab leader.

Another problem is, and dare I say, be more judgemental. Don't let any silly thing into your collab. Not something I normally suggest, but if your expectations were an award, you really weren't gonna go anywhere. Sorry for the harshness, but this was capable of being an uber collab.

The songs were well put together, and some ideas were really cool, just not pulled off.

Good luck in the future,

Jon (ChaosC.)

You have the stuff.

I can see you becoming a great sprite animator, because the fight itself had a good pace. Althought, when you say in your comment that you try not to imitate DBZ, this is a very difficlut thing to achieve when we see hedgehogs flying all over the screen, not that I dont like that kind of stuff.

So for a test this was ok, in the future(you knew this was comin'), have backrounds, pre-loaders, etc. because no one reads the comments anymore;)

Good Luck!

I lived

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