ChaosCriticisor's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[A Long MK Short]

Has a charm to it

Alot of the wit and fightstyles in this flash makes it worth watching.
Random jokes thrown in with random violence, what do you expect:D

[Pepsi machine]

I like coke more too

It still feels like it needs a graphical improvement, considering the length is so short. Wasn't entertaining except for the song at the end.

[Pokemon Center Commercial]

I thought you actually had a good idea

However, this "commercial" was awefully boring to watch, mind you it is your 1st flash, it could have been a hit.

A few suggestions -
- Use a higer framerate, like 24 fps.
- If you're using sprites, thats fine, but try to be more fluid with your tweening:
like easing, and zooming in and out.
- Make the overall style a bit more cornier, since commercial is what you're aiming for. Instead of sliding pictures, try to make it POP-OUT at me, with more interesting backround effects.
- If you are willing to go the extra step, use voice actors, even your own voice if you're up to it.

Good luck with your flash creations...

- Chaos

DarrkOne responds:

Thanks for the suggestions!

I think that I may someday update the flash once I get a better at this.
Your advice will help lots.

[So... Brawl was delayed..]

Very simple animation, but the point got across...

I'm sure alot of people felt this way. I liked the use of voice and sound, although a little bit more of animation is to be desired; maybe you didn't have to rush on it.

Still a fine piece a flash if I say so myself:D

[Flash for dummies]

I know, I KNOW!!

"Flash isn't easy" is so right, especially advanced actionscript.

Very well animated video. Loved the style, and moral. A masterpiece indeed.

Kde777 responds:

Well thank you :$.. xD, I can't even make actionscript :| .. man it's so complicated.. but lucky I can make a flash like this, I know I can make things better .. LOL :P.. thanks again

[Mario's Suprise]

Needs much more...

This really could've been good. But it lacked quality in many places:

barely any sound,
needs backrounds (I suggest looking at Mario RPGs at Spriters resource),
and it was just too slow paced,
needs some casual music.

If you work on all of this I might just look foward to part 2.

[Starcraft II]

Looks Promising...

A decent fan flash for StarCraft II. The artwork and sfx were pretty amazing. I just hope you know how to compress like hell or your going nowhere. And try to touch up on the dialogue as well, for example: "zergs."

-"Hell its about time!"

[Chaos Sonic v. Super Shad]

You have the stuff.

I can see you becoming a great sprite animator, because the fight itself had a good pace. Althought, when you say in your comment that you try not to imitate DBZ, this is a very difficlut thing to achieve when we see hedgehogs flying all over the screen, not that I dont like that kind of stuff.

So for a test this was ok, in the future(you knew this was comin'), have backrounds, pre-loaders, etc. because no one reads the comments anymore;)

Good Luck!